2011年11月7日月曜日

Second publishing

This is my 2nd poems about my favorite pictures.
I wanna publish the as 2nd publishing.
Please leave comments to improve them :)


https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tJOF9-ldm9W37C-G8qHvWLIMF1Gto-ag_Cg98wcUvn0/edit?hl=en_US&pli=1#
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  1. mio2011年11月7日 12:17

    I like your poem!
    You express the changes of time with beautiful words.
    I think it will be better you add the information about beautiful picture, for example, when, who, and for what the painter drew the goddess.

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